Music Video First Draft Analysis

We have now completed the first draft of the music video and uploaded it to Youtube. After viewing it multiple times we noticed a few issues. One issue includes the fact that in certain shots we filmed during school resulting in us not being dressed in the proper attire. Another factor being the syncing which is off in certain areas, although this can easily be fixed by editing. The structure and flow is good for a first draft and we feel although its sub par, its a good starting point.